One day I was walking through with my dog my mum heard on the radio that a gorilla had escaped from the zoo my mum tried to get in touch with me because it was last seen at the park the gorilla is named Harambe he is concerned dangers he was living in a village my dog saw another dog she started to run but the dog moved I rolled down the hill my dog following me I saw the massive village it had a cemetery suddenly I heard a big growl.
He got scared when he looked over to his dog she was going toilet and I said omg then when she was done we went I to the village together they checked the symmetry for the gorilla when they got there there were skulls on spears and there was a hand poking out of the ground with bite marks on it I decided to leave when I turned around i thaut king Kong when i saw him my dog went and sniffed his toes king Kong has a pug face when I started to walk away I hit the building when I was looking at him king Kong.
Started to charge at him he ran to the park with king Kong eventually he ran home with king kong he called his mum to open the door when he got inside we called swat to come over with tranquilizer dart they asked why they said a gorilla is in our house after 10 minutes of breaking things the swat got there and put down the gorilla the house was a mess but the people were all right.But what they didn't know is that the gorilla had a baby under the house after 2 months he learnt to walk one night when the boy was going to bed he could here snoring it wasn't his nana she was sitting on the chair watching tv i went and checked in all of the rooms there was no one to be seen he checked under the house he saw a baby gorilla sleeping it had a stomach black legs big teeth and a big chest he woke it from its sleep the gorilla looks like a panda he picked it up a took it in side and his mum said is that a panda the boy was like no it is a gorilla mum said is i the baby of the gorilla of the baby the boy said i think it is and that was the end
Hi Corbin my name is Grace from waikowhai primary school and i am 10 years old and i like your mad monkey story and your describing is so nice , keep up the hard work
ReplyDeleteKia ora Corbin, my name is Tayla and I am a year 6 student at Paihia School. I have been reading your story about the bad monkey. Your story is very creative and the part when you said “on the radio that a gorilla had escaped from the zoo “ it just made me want to keep on reading the story because it was really descriptive. Great job Corbin keep up the great work.
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ReplyDeleteI really like your story I thought it was really neat. I liked the part where there was a baby gorilla under the house. It was really cool but it was really hard to read. Could you please make the words bigger and could you please change the font. Bye for now. Keep up the great work.
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