Monday, 26 March 2018

my metaphors





Corbin
1 Corbin is a tank, giving you a chance but fighting back

2 Corbin is a mango soft on the outside juicy on the inside  

3 Corbin is an owl liking to sleep in the day, eating at night

4 Corbin is a flower fresh and red dangling of a ancient tree

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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous28 March 2018 at 10:03

    Hi Ethan here from Gilberthorpe I love your piece of writing you did about your name BLOGG YOU LATER Ethan.f

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  2. Anonymous4 April 2018 at 09:50

    thank you

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  3. Anonymous25 May 2018 at 09:53

    Hi Corbin, my name is Nikhil and I go to Waikowhai Primary School. These metaphors are amazing. Maybe next time you could add them to a recount or a story. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsnikhilg.blogspot.co.nz.

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