BIG FOOT
There was a hunter named Bob in the deep dark woods. One night he heard something big. it was in the bush right behind him he looked in the bush it was Bigfoot!!!
He got so scared he dropped his gun’ and ran. So far away screaming the whole way. On the way back home he ran into baby Small foot’!!!
He was even more scared he was screaming so bad the police heard him. The Police were so worried for how ever it was after 20 mins the Police were able to find him he was hiding in a tree when he told them about small foot and bigfoot. They did not believe him until Bigfoot was found with little foot by the swamp so he got some photos of them and showed the Police!!!
One day the animal control was at the swamp looking for Bigfoot and Smallfoot after 2 hours they were found looking for something in the lake once they were caught they were put in the circus people love him so much and they love his sun even more!!!
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ReplyDeleteHey Corbin nice story I loved it and it was a mean story bro Corbin when you are older you should make more story's
ReplyDeleteHi Corbin I like your story, it was good that you put Big foot in it. It was exciting to read. I wonder if you need to check your spacing, I like your story and you put sun instead of son.
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ReplyDeleteHey Corbin,
ReplyDeletei like your story but i think one thing you could work on is your punctuation and your spacing because it can be really hard to understand and i also think you could use sun not son
i liked your story tho :)
hi Kayla thank you for comment i appreciate your feedback and your honesty
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