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King Kong Must Die

 

In the holiday a pair of shoes escaped from shoe prison to kill his enemy King Kong so after days of traveling eventually he reached Skull island when he got to shore   there was this really scary man guarding the door for King Kong the shoes say i am here to kill King Kong the gar pulled out a spear and tried to throw it but he misted he blew a horn and brothers came out jumping off the roof all with spears.

He stole the spear and took down every single one he stole every spear and then King Kong came true smashing through the gate charging at the the shoes King Kong was bigger than he expedited when he saw king Kong he ran away screaming like a little girl King Kong was chasing him raging at him king Kong was gaining on him he threw a spear at king Kong's knows making him more angry king Kong jumped in front of him.

The shoes ran back to the village he hid a gun in his boat just in case he ran back to the boat grabbed the shotgun and hid in the boat king Kong could not find him when king Kong went back to his home he shot King Kong he went  back in the boat now that king Kong knows where he is hiding King Kong smashed his boat he got so annoyed he grabbed a spear and put it thru his eye and he said he should bleed out.

He came back and king king was laying on the ground Bobby went and checked on him he was dead Bobby just had to work out one thing how will i get me and him home he stayed on skull island one day later there was a plain luckily he had a flair gun he shot it up in the air the plain saw it he landed on skull island he screamed like a little girl when he saw skull island Bobby said don't worry he is dead the pilot took Bobby back home

He took King Kong home with  massive plane and put him on show for the world to see he felt proud to kill a ferocious beast he went home to see his family of three kids his wife grandparents when he walked thru the the door his kids came in crying his wife was crying on her bed his mum and dad came out that night they all sat down and had a nice family roast for dinner the whole family said if feels good to have a good family roast again

You are such a good dad.    

Corbin P

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Shantytown

Yesterday me and Blaketown school went to shanty town. The best part was when me and my group went gold finding i found the most. In my group my second favorite part was when we played musical chairs. they have a weird time line first it went  wood dolls animal stomachs bone and skin. then it went metal paper. then became fabric and plastic. then came electronics the hardest game i reckon was stilts. I reckon Miller was the best at the musical chairs. I reckon i was the best at the gold finding. Jyvhen and i were the best at knuckle bones Jyvhen got it before me I got it two goes later. then we played horse shoe toss. Jyvhen Liam and Tasman came first then came the stilts.I had it first out of the whole group. then we went back to the building to have some lunch.

The end by Corby.

fathers day by corbin

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BIG FOOT

There was a hunter named Bob in the deep dark woods.  One night he heard something big. it was in the bush right behind him he looked in the bush it was Bigfoot!!!

He got so scared he dropped his gun’ and ran. So far away screaming the whole way. On the way back home he ran into  baby Small foot’!!!

He was even more scared he was screaming so bad the police heard him. The Police were so worried for how ever it was after 20 mins the Police were able to find him he was hiding in a tree when he told them about small foot and bigfoot. They did not believe him until Bigfoot was found with little foot by the swamp so he got some photos of them and showed the Police!!!

One day the animal control was at the swamp looking for Bigfoot and Smallfoot after 2 hours they were found looking for something in the lake once they were caught they were put in the circus people love him so much and they love his sun even more!!!

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